Ollie & Quentin Comic: If at first you don't succeed...

Sunday, November 30, 2008

I loved the build up to this joke but I couldn't get the punchline to match it. Here are my various attempts. I was quite pleased with the final one.

Dave Shelton said...: That's lovely. Nice to see the process as you step closer and closer and then ... BOOM! ... there's the funny. Marvellous.; 9:10 am
Piers Baker said...: Thanks Dave.; 4:18 pm
angryparsnip said...: I liked them all but your right the last one was great !; 4:34 pm